Hmmmmnnnggggg
You did a great job here, nice mastering, but there's one thing that's been bothering me, and that is your last chord you use in the chorus, because originally it's not the same as the verses.
The last chord has to be A major, where you use a C major chord, which makes the last notes of the vocals sound extremely, well, not nice. Would be great if you fixed that :D
Will get right on that. Thank you so much!
Soothing ._.
Great sound man, the hihat sounded a tad generic, but the vocal slicing was really amazing man! Those chord hits were really chilling, I loved it.
Great work man, keep it up! :D
Yeah, I know what you mean by generic. I tried making a more build-up slicing with the vocals, but it didn't turn out right plus even if I did, it would ruin how soothing this song is & make it seem like it'd be more extreme. Glad you liked the chords. They're actually Rhodes with a liquid FX to it. Thanx for the review!!!
Great!
Nice job, I liked that dreamy lead effect thing in the first choruses, it really improved the atmosphere. I totally loved the breakdown, it sounded really trancey, I loved that.
The best thing was that your chords were dancey, but totally not cheesy or overused, best thing ever :D
Anyway, I loved the song, you're improving really fast!
Great job, keep it up! :D
Yeah, I used that pad in the intro for that kinda FX where you're gonna listen to this dreamy song. Really glad you liked the break, I tried makin' somethin' dark trancey there. I made sure the chord progression was nice & not total crap as I have been using less in my songs, but still have a lot. I'm also really glad that my filtering FX is getting better. Thanx you for the review & kind words!!!
Great!
Awesome melodies, that's for one.
I loved your synths, your orchestra was really nice. Is that Soundfont or VST?
Oh, wait.. YAAAY, YAAAY, YAA-Y-Y-Y-YAAAY :D
I love your solos, they sound great.
Great work man, keep it up :D:D
Thank you! My orchestra sounds are from a vst called Edirol Orchestral. Oh hold on a sec... YAH-YAH-Y-Y-YAY-YAY-YAH-YAH. ;D
Outstanding sir!
This song has a unique feel to it, it's arps are making you want to dance, your kick was moving, you breakdown was absolutely epic.
Your chord progression was a unique one, not overused. I loved you basslines. :D
Great job, keep it up :D
Yeah, it's like a feel that your traveling through space as your being chased through the galaxy & fighting aliens, in my opinion. Funny, I just realized I mainly only panned the arps :D Glad you thought the kick was moving, somethin' trancey I wanted to add. I really am glad you liked that break cuz I was like "hmmm... this break has to be perfect." Glad you liked my chord progression. I tried adding a good bass that was to sub like to actually sound more like a bass. Thanx you very much for the review!!!
Amazing!
Great liquid track, I'm looking forward to see the end result. Great soothing beats and those chords you used are outstanding. I'll just fav this track, just to remember myself I have to stay tuned for the end result :D
Great job man, love it!
Thanks for your review! I'll definitely PM you when it's done. :D
Great sound, nice melodies!
First of all, great melodies. The chords were cheesy, but it's about how you use them. And you used them really well.
I love your use of filters, the right moments and right timing.
My only concern is your beat. You could really do something more with that kick. Your kick is pretty weak-sounding. If you put it in the mixer and play around with EQ, mess around with the frequencies, your kick would have a lot more punch and power, making the song more interesting and the pace a little more moving.
Your hihat's could also use some work. Perhaps EQ'ing them or replacing them with a differrent hihat (with less higher frequencies) would sound better. You could also add a subtle open hihat between each kick.
Anyway, they're just suggestions, your melodies and synths are great, just as your song structure. Your beat could just use some work :)
Great job, keep it up! :D
i know what you mean, im always trying to find better ways of mastering my drums but it is hard for me. ty for the critisism! very helpful.
-SG
Haow u liek dem applez?
Your music could stop the hunger in third world countries! :D
I love your work man, every synth sound perfect, I love your mixing, especially your hard basses :D
Thank you so much! Im glad you like the basses =).
Amazing
Freaking awesome man! I loved the intro, buildup, drop, I loved it once more, I loved your breakdown, your samples, your second drop, the brass you put in, your final drop and outro. And that 3 times more.
Your mixing was great, I really liked your sound. I havn't got any constructive criticism for you, so I'll just give you these 15 awesomepoints.
10/10, 5/5
Great job, keep it up man :D
Thanks a lot!!! :D
Quite stuggled a lot with the breakdown stuff, had to compose it from scratch and add it to the original song without it sounding awkwardly placed x) So glad you liked it! :)
Good loop
You've got some good percussion and synths here. Just that there are two points in the song where there's a horrible offnote, that actually screws it all. It's on the third chord, you've got three notes, C# D# C#, the D# should be a D, or else it's not in tune. But since you made it with the demo, I hope you get the full version, because this has some potential :D
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I'm an amateur producer that loves melodic music! :D I don't actually give a crap if your mastering is half-assed, as long as it's audible and it's made with some good knowledge of music! :D However, awesome mastering is always a nice extra, right? :D
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