Nice
I really like the concept, but the song could use some improvement.
For example, your vocals sound nice, but they could use some editing, subtle reverb and delay, perhaps something like a vocoder (you shouldn't overdo that). And, not to sound harsh, I really like the vocals, but I think it would catch on more if they were in english. Perhaps a reminder for future projects with vocals. :]
Also, your kick has a snare-feel on top of it. That sounds fine when it's nearing a build-up, but it's a bit too much if you use it everywhere in the song. I recommend taking a kick that has the same nice punch to it (or eq'ing it till it has that punch), because the kick is great, it's just that that snare-ish sound is a bit too much.
One final recommendation is that the song could use a little more to fill it in. A nice pad or (arping) submelody could do wonders.
These are just recommendations to keep in mind for future projects, I'm not trying to be a nitpicking asshole :P
Keep it going man, nice work, keep it up! :D
5/5